Well done Sude. Its really funny. There’s no full stops but its a great piece of work
very funny sude it was a lovely poem. good rhymes remember to add more detail!
:] well done you used good rhyming couplets . next time but full stop at the end but an amazing work hardly any errors
rhyming’s were good. funny work. next time use connectives
It is extremely funny I wanted to read on but sadly it ended very good and it rhymes.
Well done Sude i enjoyed it lot looks like a good poem that deserves to be publish as a book. next time put full stops but overall amazing.
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Well done Sude. Its really funny. There’s no full stops but its a great piece of work
very funny sude it was a lovely poem. good rhymes remember to add more detail!
:] well done you used good rhyming couplets . next time but full stop at the end but an amazing work hardly any errors
rhyming’s were good.
funny work.
next time use connectives
It is extremely funny I wanted to read on but sadly it ended very good and it rhymes.
Well done Sude i enjoyed it lot looks like a good poem that deserves to be publish as a book. next time put full stops but overall amazing.