It was very good but some errors I did not get bored at all it was very funny its one of the best I have read
What errors could I improve on?
Well done Ellie you have done a excellent blog and you have done great rimes
a excellent poem Ellie nice picture I loved your poem and your rhymes as well!!
I enjoyed this poem the best
this poem is very funny and interesting….I didn’t Get bored LUIS
That was AMAZING i thought that was perfect it rhymed amazingly few errors but so far best one i read. you had funny lines as well :]
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It was very good but some errors I did not get bored at all it was very funny its one of the best I have read
What errors could I improve on?
Well done Ellie you have done a excellent blog and you have done great rimes
a excellent poem Ellie nice picture I loved your poem and your rhymes as well!!
I enjoyed this poem the best
this poem is very funny and interesting….I didn’t Get bored LUIS
That was AMAZING i thought that was perfect it rhymed amazingly
few errors but so far best one i read. you had funny lines as well :]