I found your work fantastic and I thought it was a great idea to have sub-headings for each paragraph. Also, I learnt more facts than I knew before such as, before I never knew that Charles Babbage created the computer in 1830 but now I know. One thing you could improve, is maybe expanding on your first paragraph.
Dania, i love the way that you included lists of websites that are useful to us also I like the way you have used bright, eye catching colours. You could inprove on he first paragraph as it is to short.
I really liked your presentation and the way you lay out your work. I liked the colours you used. Maybe you can add bit more information in your first paragraph. I learnt that Charles Babbage created the computer in 1830.
I like the font that you used. But I would like a picture or 2. You included lots of information
I found your work fantastic and I thought it was a great idea to have sub-headings for each paragraph. Also, I learnt more facts than I knew before such as, before I never knew that Charles Babbage created the computer in 1830 but now I know. One thing you could improve, is maybe expanding on your first paragraph.
Dania, i love the way that you included lists of websites that are useful to us also I like the way you have used bright, eye catching colours. You could inprove on he first paragraph as it is to short.
I really liked your presentation and the way you lay out your work. I liked the colours you used. Maybe you can add bit more information in your first paragraph. I learnt that Charles Babbage created the computer in 1830.