I love how you made your blog coulerful and I learnt new things!You could improve it by looking at the first paragragh and use less “ands”. Also you used “have laptops” twice but other than that I love it.Good Job!!!
I really enjoyed reading your work. It was brilliant. I liked the colours you used for your background, the writing and the borders. I leant that you can use the internet to send emails , listening to music or playing games on your computer. I loved it!!
Lydia this was a sensational blog you had bright colours that made you work very eye catching. I like how you put your paragraphs into text boxes which had different colours. You just need…to improve on your missing punctuation (I lost my breath reading some bits) also your capital letters need to be in use, however the rest was the best words that I can think of (amazing, fantastic, ornate etc.)
I love how you made your blog coulerful and I learnt new things!You could improve it by looking at the first paragragh and use less “ands”. Also you used “have laptops” twice but other than that I love it.Good Job!!!
I really enjoyed reading your work. It was brilliant. I liked the colours you used for your background, the writing and the borders. I leant that you can use the internet to send emails , listening to music or playing games on your computer. I loved it!!
Lydia this was a sensational blog you had bright colours that made you work very eye catching. I like how you put your paragraphs into text boxes which had different colours. You just need…to improve on your missing punctuation (I lost my breath reading some bits) also your capital letters need to be in use, however the rest was the best words that I can think of (amazing, fantastic, ornate etc.)