An excellent piece of writing! I am glad you are using the e-school to help you with your learning. Well done for using a picture. Next time remember capital letters at the start of your sentences and a full stop at the end!
Lovely piece of work Natalie! It is good to see you are using at ICT at home to improve your learning. I agree with Miss Chander that you must watch out for your punctuation but a very good job! See me for a sticker. 🙂
Miss Khinda
An excellent piece of writing! I am glad you are using the e-school to help you with your learning. Well done for using a picture. Next time remember capital letters at the start of your sentences and a full stop at the end!
Lovely piece of work Natalie! It is good to see you are using at ICT at home to improve your learning. I agree with Miss Chander that you must watch out for your punctuation but a very good job! See me for a sticker. 🙂
Miss Khinda