well done i like your font so I think it is the right font . she has interesting facts and pictures. i think you should add one caption .
You did a great job at punctuation Fantastic job at adjectives You need to improve by not repeating the same word
You did well on your sedimentary rocks information. But you could improve by not putting the same word twice after you had just put it.
Teya your work is fantastic! Your writing is great. Your facts are so so so colorful. You need to include more pictures.
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well done i like your font so I think it is the right font .
she has interesting facts and pictures.
i think you should add one caption .
You did a great job at punctuation
Fantastic job at adjectives
You need to improve by not repeating the same word
You did well on your sedimentary rocks information. But you could improve by not putting the same word twice after you had just put it.
Teya your work is fantastic!
Your writing is great.
Your facts are so so so colorful.
You need to include more pictures.