good work and writing about iphone5s.good publisher and you used aforest. next time more connectives
Very interesting David.:) 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂
Very interesting! It Is Very Persuading. Make sure it makes sense O.o 🙂
veryyyy interesting David well done
Nice detail and loved how you used questions and persuaded the reader to read on . hardly any erros just include some more interesting facts but overall amazing!!!!!!!
Very interesting David it hooked me so I could read on!
very interesting
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good work and writing about iphone5s.good publisher and you used aforest.
next time more connectives
Very interesting David.:) 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂
Very interesting! It Is Very Persuading. Make sure it makes sense O.o 🙂
veryyyy interesting David well done
Nice detail and loved how you used questions and persuaded the reader to read on . hardly any erros just include some more interesting facts but overall amazing!!!!!!!
Very interesting David it hooked me so I could read on!
very interesting