good work and writing about iphone5s.good publisher and you used aforest. next time more connectives
Very interesting David.:)
Very interesting! It Is Very Persuading. Make sure it makes sense O.o
veryyyy interesting David well done
Nice detail and loved how you used questions and persuaded the reader to read on . hardly any erros just include some more interesting facts but overall amazing!!!!!!!
Very interesting David it hooked me so I could read on!
very interesting
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good work and writing about iphone5s.good publisher and you used aforest.
next time more connectives
Very interesting David.:)
Very interesting! It Is Very Persuading. Make sure it makes sense O.o
veryyyy interesting David well done
Nice detail and loved how you used questions and persuaded the reader to read on . hardly any erros just include some more interesting facts but overall amazing!!!!!!!
Very interesting David it hooked me so I could read on!
very interesting