A great diary entry Shanice, I was hooked and wanted to read more. Next time, make sure you read each sentence to ensure it makes sense. Well done for inserting a picture too.
Well done Shanice I found it very interesting. You made a few errors including capital letters not at the beginning of a sentence but overall it is a great piece of work. 🙂
A great diary entry Shanice, I was hooked and wanted to read more. Next time, make sure you read each sentence to ensure it makes sense. Well done for inserting a picture too.
Thanks for the advise Mr Bate next time, I will read over my work!
Well done Shanice I found it very interesting. You made a few errors including capital letters not at the beginning of a sentence but overall it is a great piece of work. 🙂
nice I really enjoyed it
Well done Shanice a great blog and it was exciting to read
it really hooked me.
I loved it.
You had an great picture that hooked me on instantly u forget to check your work careully but you putt lots of detail in your work.
Well Done shanice and put a more fact about it.