Diwali

6 Responses to Diwali

1. tiger H says:

   November 23, 2015 at 1:48 pm

   I think you were successful because you used more pictures. Next time you could write more
2. ya says:

   November 23, 2015 at 1:49 pm

   I think you were successful because you put up Indian food and the rangoli patterns. next lesson for fireworks.
3. TR says:

   November 23, 2015 at 1:55 pm

   I think you were successful because you have amazing pictures.
   Next time you could add Ravana taking Sita in his chariot.
4. superq says:

   November 23, 2015 at 1:56 pm

   I think you were successful because your pictcure was nice.Next time they could do more writing inprove the firework.
5. piggydk says:

   November 23, 2015 at 1:56 pm

   That’s brilliant some sentences don’t make sense.
6. garrife n says:

   November 23, 2015 at 1:58 pm

   I like your explaining and next time don’t do more pictures

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