You have used very interesting facts about Aphrodite, it is very nice.
Next time you could change the colour of your writing some more interesting facts about her.
You could use some appearance and some personality’s about her next time.
*like that you have used some adjectives.
You have got some wonderful information.
I learnt some good facts.
I would like to see some more information next time.
You choose a good god.
You have put a lot of effort.
You can also write a lot more.
*You told me interesting facts
*You have a great picture
=put more writing in your work
*You told me interesting things
*You have a grate picture
=Add more writing in your paragraphes
*I love your adjectives
*I love your picture and your facts
>I wish you did a lot of writing
*I love this picture.
*Used fantastic vocabulary.
-I wish you had finished.
You have used very interesting facts about Aphrodite, it is very nice.
Next time you could change the colour of your writing some more interesting facts about her.
You could use some appearance and some personality’s about her next time.
*like that you have used some adjectives.
You have got some wonderful information.
I learnt some good facts.
I would like to see some more information next time.