*I learnt some facts about Hades from your blog post.
*I like that you used and interesting font and different colours to make it visually interesting.
=> it would be better to check your spellings and punctuation before you post the blog entry.
*Your picture really stood out and matched your interesting writing
*Hey your writing gave me good facts so i’m waiting to read your next one
=Why not use more orenge or yellow kind of colour for your writing and please write more next time
*I learnt some facts about Hades from your blog post.
*I like that you used and interesting font and different colours to make it visually interesting.
=> it would be better to check your spellings and punctuation before you post the blog entry.
well done
i like your work and colours
keep it up and write a bit more
*Good colours.
*Nice picture.
Use Punctuation.
I love your gods vocabulary
You have made a good effort
I like your gods appearance
Please use punctuation
*Your picture really stood out and matched your interesting writing
*Hey your writing gave me good facts so i’m waiting to read your next one
=Why not use more orenge or yellow kind of colour for your writing and please write more next time
*The picture and the work is great.
*Check your spellings.
-I like your work.