A lovely poem! You have used a range of poetic features effectively. Could you have used a metaphor?
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a very nice poem, you have used a lot of rhyme and repetition. The hand writing makes it harder to see.
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A lovely poem! You have used a range of poetic features effectively. Could you have used a metaphor?
This is good
a very nice poem, you have used a lot of rhyme and repetition. The hand writing makes it harder to see.