Swimming pool

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9 Responses to Swimming pool

  1. kchander says:

    A fantastic poem full of humour! What other poetic features could you use for effect?

  2. smitr says:

    personification and similies that makes a great poem

  3. maisam5 says:

    I like the poem because it was realy funny and it made me laugh but it didn’t make much sense

  4. alfie p says:

    this poem is very good it rhymes alot

  5. Nirosh N says:

    A fantastic poem, I like to write poem too.

  6. lioness.c says:

    I like your poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  7. smitr says:

    THATS A FANTASTIC POEM

  8. Ervis and Harvir says:

    WOW!
    Hi this poem was outstanding!
    I loved the way you rhymed it and WELL DONE! for being so creative.

  9. ahmaa says:

    It has a very good rhyme.

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