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1. tanis says:

   March 20, 2014 at 1:52 pm

   I like it because someone is swimming in the ocean.
   You could make it better by making it into a story and it to be slow.
2. Ubayd says:

   March 20, 2014 at 1:53 pm

   I liked the rainbow that is put in. I wish you didn’t make it too fast
3. kherk says:

   March 20, 2014 at 2:00 pm

   I like the things you had put on but don’t make it so fast make it a little bit slow.

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