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3 Responses to title

  1. tanis says:

    I like it because someone is swimming in the ocean.
    You could make it better by making it into a story and it to be slow.

  2. Ubayd says:

    I liked the rainbow that is put in. I wish you didn’t make it too fast

  3. kherk says:

    I like the things you had put on but don’t make it so fast make it a little bit slow.

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